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I walked up the stairs,
And into the light.
But what I saw,
Was such a fright.
I examined the body,
That lay in such a way.
The blood kept flowing,
Away, away.
I knelt down,
And touched her face.
The warmth was all gone,
The pulse was erased.
The young woman,
That laid on the floor.
Who once was someone,
Was no more.
I turned my head,
To look away.
What could I say,
So distant away?
I touched my face,
And began to cry.
My sobbing was mellow,
And indiscreet.
I fell to my knees,
Hair now in my face.
How could this be real,
If I'm still breathing?
I opened my eyes,
And to my surprise.
The young woman.
Was me.
- by [.P e I p E r A.] |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: A Dream That Shouldn't Be
- Artist: [.P e I p E r A.]
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Description:
Something I wrote, with a twist...
Read and enjoy! - Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: dream twist wicked
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Comments (6 Comments)
- [.P e I p E r A.] - 07/31/2009
- Thank you all for your nice comments! ^^
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- Guilty_Fills_Over - 07/02/2009
- Amazing! You came up with a very good ending...It shocked me I didnt know that was coming....Very Good. This story poem tell's me " Expect the unexpected". Very well done. 5/5
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- xXbloo24Xx - 06/24/2009
- beautiful
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- [.P e I p E r A.] - 02/22/2009
- Thanks. ^^
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- fairy princess girl 88 - 02/20/2009
- this poem is good!
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- dustbunny9000 - 12/24/2008
- awesome poem. kinda creepy though, but thats good.
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