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Feeling of betrayal
It all happened so fast,
Wasn't suppose to last.
Wish it lasted longer than it had
Cause now when I see you it hurts real bad!
When I see you in the hallway
I want to stop today,
I want to talk today.
But I don't and I can't, so I keep walking on
Head down, eyes shut, just disappear and be gone
Because when I see you, I want to forget
All we had, every thought, every bet
When I see you in the hallway
The feeling of betrayal finds me
You don't even look today
Don't you see?
I'm trying to forget
Everything you left
All the memories to stop
Your voice
Your eyes
Your hair
Your stinking personality
That's when the feeling of betrayal sneaks upon me.
- by Maya star 15 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: Feeling of betrayal
- Artist: Maya star 15
- Description: A poem I wrote awhile back, near the start of school. I know it not be that good but please enjoy!
- Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: feeling betrayal
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kunoburedeji - 04/11/2009
- I would've felt it more, if you had either kept rhiming through out or not rhimed at all instead of mixing it and I felt that your choice of wording was fairly poor, it is fairly good for a beginner however.
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- midnight roamer7 - 12/22/2008
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wat waz it about?
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