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Jesus Saves
Lord, are you there?
my pain is so real,
my hurt senses feel
Save me from my woes,
why do you deny me?!
have I not denounced your foes?
Where is my divine protection?
my shining star,
God is in my reflection,
I cried out, but you never came,
seems a bit deranged,
to me...
I never strayed from the path,
or questioned you,
for fear of your wrath,
I kept myself from calling out,
all your logical flaws,
seems my faith is not so stout,
Is my spirit dying?
or is it even there,
Perhaps those Christians were lying?
These are not schemes, lord,
can't you tell dreams, lord!?
Do my hopes mean nothing!?
Why!?
Why do you let my spirit die!?
Hah! you cannot let my spirit die,
do you know why?
Because you were never really there...
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Jesus Saves
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Do not rate this low if you disagree with me! That is unethical.
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: jesus saves
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- it's really cool~ the rhyming makes it all flow together kinda.. :]
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- denden456 - 12/29/2008
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If Catholics or Christians(like me) read this, they're really gonna feel insulted. BUt, i don't. ^-^
Nice poem. Has the flow, the sound, the....everything. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Mud99 - 12/24/2008
- Just accept it for what it is.
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/22/2008
- aw, seems I wasn't the first to comment! sweatdrop never mind. It's quite nice but...it's sayin that you(uhm..) don't believe in jesus being there... neutral
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- ~Mini_Daisy~ - 12/21/2008
- You rock at writing :3
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