Silent Twilight

• Artist: Ac1dBlaze
• Description: This is one of my favorite works, look at my other stuff, have me as your idol, add this to your fav, join my guild:The guild of the people, or vote high and comment
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: silent twilight

In the red moon lit town
It was dead silent
The moon was never down
No one knew what it meant
Just like everyone died
But everyone is still alive
In this tale I have not lied
Nothing rushed to survive

Nothing tried to laugh or weep
The silence will never break
Because everything was asleep
No one was at all awake
Not a snore or wheeze
Or a simple squeak
Not even the midnight breeze
Dare try to speak

It was a twilight bliss
No one could weave
The kind that gives you a kiss
When you try to leave
And then you want to stay
Relax, to stay and lie
While you just lay
You start to ask why

It makes you feel calm
And it helps you see
In your own warm palm
What truly makes you free
And it starts to convince
Your soul is actually freed
Thats from ever since
The smallest deed

This is a thing you'll never lend
A beauty you'll never share
But all good things have to end
Most think this is not fair
You slowly start to cry
Yet you don't make a sound
As you try to say goodbye
Your tears hit the ground.....

Comments

[Roy124]

amazzing

[strict-fighter3000]

HEHE

[xXhelen roxXx]

beatiful

[iiSirhc]

nice! you beat my rating of my own poem! I'll give u 4/5 because u have
one teeny weeny mispelled word. But in all, it's a great poem.^_^

[CaraBabie]

Really Good it gives a good description and it gives a good feel and i think it sort of makes you think 4/5

[ginlite_imatz]

your words are not too exaggerating....
but it means a lot.......
so nice....
(try some unique words ^_^)
amazing though 4/5

[Whiny Technocrat]

Awesome, man