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The day I saw you
I knew it was true
The day I built up the courage
To talk to you, you said yes
Unexpected response made
My heart pound
My stomach turn
My palms sweat
And my thoughts race
We lasted months
Both afraid to say
The three magic words
I was first to torture myself
and force myself to say it
You said the words back
Again my heart flipped in joy
Unsure if yours did too
I looked into your eyes
As i had several times before
I saw the gleam of love
And i smiled
tears welled in my eyes
but i fought back these tears
and simply hugged you
a silent thank you
Now later
We're being torn apart
by family and friends
But through it all
We stand together
to share the pain
We hug and kiss
And say the magic words
easily now
withstanding many assaults
on our ever-lasting love
- by ThexDemonicxPenguin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/16/2008 |
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- Title: Enduring love
- Artist: ThexDemonicxPenguin
- Description: ya i wrote this poem for my girlfriend, that i love with all my heart. and since i have no clue what to say comment and rate pls
- Date: 12/16/2008
- Tags: enduring love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Nylon Steelsen - 05/29/2009
- just b real sweet, dont b a a*****e, and write a poem like this dude XD ur girlfriend prbbly liked the poem! Keep it up! 5/5
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- death152 - 04/21/2009
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idk how to get agirl so help me
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- Lamented Sin - 12/17/2008
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Wow this is a really sweet poem. I wish I could write something like this to my gf.
Anyway you did an excellent job 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Unfound Dreams - 12/17/2008
- Yeah my relationships never last, maybe like a week and a half. Anywayz, I like it, and I think you did a good job.
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- XxThePsychoAngelxX - 12/17/2008
- awww thats the sweetest poem ive ever read...i wonder who its about... idk lol xD eye lah view!!
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- ~Shadey Sam~ - 12/16/2008
- Very well captured. And I'm glad you and your g/f are happy, I hope it lasts.
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