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outlined shadows, creeping sounds; all that wonders in the dark
the girl, she falls, no one around; not a soul, shes all alone
spiraling downward in this spacey abyss
she fell to her knees; her hands to her face
as she screams she begs and pleads; for help as tears flow down her cheeks
all shes been holding back
a drop of blood from her mouth; slowly it hits the floor
life speeding south; crashing before her eyes
what did she do to deserve this?
all she loved burst into flames; no one could imagine
the horror and pain; she sat there crying
begging for help
she stumbles to her feet; trying not to fall
death, soon she'll meet; the taste of blood in the crease of her lips
still alone
walking with her hand on the wall; trying to keep her balence
she trips and falls; slamming against the floor once again
she screams in pain
the girl lay there in a puddle of red; breathes, slowly decreasing
shes finally dead; and no one will ever know
-Mikey
- by x-Rainbow C O N D O M Z-x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: hopeless
- Artist: x-Rainbow C O N D O M Z-x
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Description:
well i was kinda sad when i wrote this O_o but yea
rate nicely please - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: hopeless
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Comments (6 Comments)
- blessedwishes - 12/30/2008
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This poem is amazing! Good job Mimi biggrin ^_^
5/5~! <3 - Report As Spam
- x-Rainbow C O N D O M Z-x - 12/13/2008
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thank you everyone ^/////^ <---blushy face thingy
:3 - Report As Spam
- QuItE-LiTtLe-RaNdOmpuddin - 12/13/2008
- WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE >< =] NICE POEM
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- Xx_heartbroken29_xX - 12/13/2008
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mikey chu did a good job on it
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chu da best ^^ - Report As Spam
- -Pirate Bumble Bee- - 12/13/2008
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GO MIKEY WHOO!!!
Whoo
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*sits in the stands and cheers u on*
GO MIKEY - Report As Spam
- Miifan67 - 12/13/2008
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yah first comment! great job Tobi I is going to post one soon
P.S 5/5! - Report As Spam