My promise to Santa Clause

• Artist: White_Snow_Princess09
• Description: Hey Santa Clause
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: mypromisetosanta

Santa Clause is real
but some people wants gift from Santa Clause
Because they be live in Santa
Santa Clause is in north pool
y, Santa have all the letters from good to bad children
Before Santa Clause is going to town he pick up the gifts for children.
Because Santa Clause is real u know

Santa is an imagination
Santa Clause is coming to town
Santa Clause is in your heart if u all be live in Santa
but others not Be live in Santa

Santa is only were a mask or costume

no, Santa is in north pool
reading letters that were deliver to him....



My promise to Santa will be good

Comments

[White_Snow_Princess09]

well. thanks for commenting,

[AwakenedDevil546]

oh and i dnt belive in santa clause, i dnt think i should really belive a fat white guy with a long a** beard

[AwakenedDevil546]

i think its ohkay, you need a little more experinence with poetry,
good though, keep working at it and you'll do great

[deaths_moon_light]

i think its ok but there are a few mistakes i can see. i really like it though. if you try you can make a job out of it.

[Mikilala1the1third]

I have to be honest... I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to get across. Be careful to make clear, concise lines that are understandable.

[Rygaen Yuui]

If english isn't your first language I'm thoroughly impressed.

Practice makes perfect.

[turtle_fanatic_rabbit]

And the content seems to be more on how others believe in Santa rather than your promise--which is mentioned in the last line only.