Is this love?

• Artist: SammToast101
• Description:
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: loverelationships

My heart is pounding,

And my throat is dry,

My hands are sweaty,

And I can't stop looking your way.

Is this what they call love,

When my heart is pounding,

And my cheeks burn red?

When I just can’t seem to get your image out of my head?

I dare to move forward

but then I move back.

Afraid of being rejected

afraid that my feelings wont be met.

but what is love, with out chances

without risks and mistakes

so I draw in a breath, and move foreward

and I hope for the best.

Comments

[muffinmage]

It's short and concise. I really like it. You get a lot of feelings packed into a short poem. It's a hard thing to do but I think you did well.

[__xXChoco-Chip-muffinXx__]

********** GREAT JOB IT WAS CUTE I LUV IT biggrin

[cas1995]

this is a beautiful poem ur amazing keep it up 5/5 !

[Friday Heart]

ur really good i give it a 5/5 u should read my "live love die" poem plzzzzz

[dee32693]

thats great!! i especially love how it ended. full of hope and promise ^^