Im sorry

• Artist: un3dead3spirit3
• Description: first time my bf and i broke up he wrote me a sad poem and this was my poem that i wrote in reply.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: sorry

I’m sorry that I didn’t see,

The way I hurt you,

When you thought it was meant to be,

I’m sorry That I didn’t care,

When you needed to talk to me,

Yet I wasn’t even there,

I’m sorry I never told you,

Even when it didn’t matter,

I thought you found someone new,

Im not sorry I got so mad,

Although you didn’t trust me,

In my opinion you still deserve to be this sad.

Comments

[Fille aux Cheveux de Lin]

Bwoff... I agree with Cyber, it's a rhyming letter, not much more. But, kudos, it's not bad. (:

[Desmotes]

It seems a bit more like a letter than a poem to me, but maybe that's just because it's formatted like a letter but with wriming words.