Loan

• Artist: bOSz_livin
• Description: I wrote this poem due to the cause that my friend had just died because of violence, here in Oakland, Ca. His death hurt me so bad because he was like a brother to me and his loss was like i lost a part of me, and it made me realize that life is something to precious to let it go to waste.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: loan

Loan...

We can never understand the fact
that our life is just a loan
that at one point in our life we have to let someone go
and when that happens all we have left
are the precious memories left behind
that are worht more than the world
but this planet called our home
is filled with hatred and sorrow
build by the miscomunication each and evryone holds
so live, laugh, love
because every minute of your life is one minute less
of a loan waiting to finish
cry

Comments

[Nikki4815]

I really do like it. It's true, and makes sense. ^^ 5/5.

[Firey Bubble]

Aw, it's so cute... I realy love it, it's amazing! ^.^