misunderstood

• Artist: blueRose98
• Description: this is a true story about me sadly T_T
  (after what had happened)
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: misunderstood love

I thought you were avoiding me.
I found that i was wrong.
you were just confused and i was playing along.
I thouh that you were mad at me,
for no apparent reason,
but I knew you better than that,
because it is our season.
A friend of mine came up to me,
and told me what you said.
She said that you said that
"I was beautiful,and flawless in every way."
I droped my mouth with a tear in my eye,
not knowing what to say.
She also said you said that you,
"love me, and care a whole lot."
My eyes were big,
and i was thinking
"god, im an idiot..."
Because, she said that you said,
" I thought she was avoiding me..."
And from begining to end,
it was all just a misunderstanding...

Comments

[Lilizarr93]

hmmmm......thats pretty good i got to say.and yea.misunderstandings can turn out that way.hurtful and painful at certain days....but it teaches us a lesson that should stick and stay.non communication is also a factor in play,but ok,it was resolved so the problem was solved so pray.that a new true situation don't come out of the blue because its always true that when its up to fate, it just may

[Lilizarr93]

thats rly good.and yea.misunderstandings can suck ~_~

lemme give it a shot

[Xsmexii_elmoX]

oo dang misunderstandings hurt but i knew that

[Blade Nebula]

O... ouch. >< Misunderstandings DO hurt and your poem gives the message clearly. You have an erratic rhyming scheme, but I find that sometimes the best poems don't need to rhyme. ^^ I'm looking forward to your next work!
But umm... there are some slight grammar mistakes though, sorry I'm a bit of a grammar freak xD "Know" should be "no" I believe and... 'aparent' should be 'apparent'. But don't worry, they're just minor mistakes ^^