Lurking Virus

• Artist: PoetryGirl93
• Description: Yeah this is another one of my poems its actually my latest one. Please comment on it.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: lurking virus

Something lurks
Inside your body,
Your mirrored life
Slowly dwindling
Away each day;

You are frightened
Of your future shortcomings,
Terrified of what
Tomorrow may bring.

Your true self
Trapped deep inside
Vowing to one day
Escape, fighting off
The virus that lurks
Within your soul.

But that inanimate
Illness will never
Resign forever
Because what is
Lurking inside
You is pain.

Comments

[Marionette_Mentation]

Hmm.. difficult to comment on this but i beleive that everyone is different so in other words we feel pain differently but i think this poem gives it a strong yet vague meaning to the feeling of pain...comment back plz ^.^

[dark_angel6587]

that is a very real poem and i think that it describes a lot of what people are going through right now so i give it a perfect score