The Pain Won't Go Away

• Artist: Rainbow Dino Porn xP
• Description: Well,i tried very hard for this so i hope u rate me and comment it :] plz :)
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: pain wont away

ii go to sleep
and as ii lay
ii get a call
ii hear my heart poundiing when ii get the news.

ii go to sleep
but as ii sleep ii thiink about you
when ii see your picture ii cry
cry liike a new born about to diie

o when
when wiill thiis dam paiin go away
ii thiink of wat ii miight do to myself sciince you left
iin the morniing i get a knife and stab myself
as ii fall ii smiile and wiish that youll be wiith me forever and ever

ii stiill cant get thiis paiin to go...
away.

Comments

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

well.. you may not like this advice but here it is.. instead of saying like i stab my self... say like i releived the pain ... i toke my own soul away.. i hope you will be with me forever... cause when you state directly how you killed your self it takes away the suspence.. but plz keep the falling to the ground part.. its good... keep writing.. 4/5