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there you were standen there
i saw your wonderful hair
i said hello
you nice fello
we talked and talked
then we walked
then i found out
an did shout
you had a girlfriend
someone yo could tend
you replaced me with her
im such a cur
for thinking i had you
what am i gona do
we had lots in commen
a lot better then rammen
i really liked you
now what to do
she has everything
i bet she can sing
hope she makes you happy
im bein so sappy
please come back
with out you i lack
happyness
theres so much sappyness
im so sory
but its hard to talk to you
i try to smile
its so damn hard when shes around
good bye
you love someone else
- by iCandyRainbowz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: you love someone else
- Artist: iCandyRainbowz
- Description: this really hpened i was really sad if it hapens to you be ok relize its ok an it s poem but this made my heart break
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Makoto_22 - 12/18/2008
- its good^^
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- Anonimaus - 12/16/2008
- lol its probably better than mine, mines just on peace nd sh!t like that.... 4/5
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- Crimson Velvet - 12/03/2008
- It seems like sometimes you were just trying to find a way to make it rhyme, but not really using meaningful words- like sappy and ramen. Also, you might want to make sure everything is spelled right. I noticed about 10 spelling errors... 2/5
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- xXx-Kyuubi_Kyosho-xXx - 12/02/2008
- hi....it was nice, but....need more feeling, more passion, but was great smile
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- Lord Lothric - 11/30/2008
- nice 5.5
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- datota - 11/30/2008
- 5/5 its good smile
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