Because of a man

• Artist: luvsndair
• Description: Just wrote it........
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: because

Here I am
walking all alone
Trying to figure out
how things went wrong

I've got my own life
he got his

Still every little thing I see
bring his memries back...

I don't know how to escape from the past


Just because of a man..

Comments

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

thate sums up the way i fell and it is all cause uf a man that i will never get to call mine again!

[luvsndair]

gee, thnx for your comments..........

[Drop-kicks Nuns]

*sigh* This also sounds like me. 5/5 =)

[Queen Mumbie]

this is very heart felt I c, however it lacks the poetic intrest. not meaning to attack or anything. but I have published some poetry in the past. let's disect this here shall we? first off. If you were going for more of a diary era, you mastered that. Emily dickinson wrote in Diary form for most of her life, however during the end, she began to write in a public form, but they were never published until after her death. If this is ment to be public, you are far off from that. best wishes

[Angel blood_Devil heart]

sounds like me 5/5