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It seems that whenever I open the page,
There's a hundred poets waiting to rant and to rage
Of the death of their love, and of their love of death.
They cry bitter tears with their every breath.
Their couplets are paired off in riveting angst,
And to shadows and burdens, they give ample thanks
As they pen down their sorrows with moaning and sighs,
And complain of a world with such scandals and lies.
Now, it's all well and good to let sorrows be heard,
But the way poems are going these days is absurd.
And you may find this statement unfeeling and lame...
But the poems I see today all sound the same.
Do not misunderstand, I do not mean to mock.
I just have no desire to be one of the flock.
If your pain is so real, then I must ask you first
Why each line that you write comes out sounding rehearsed?
Before you may call my remarks into question,
Please allow me to give you this friendly suggestion.
While you are posting this depressing display,
It does nothing to help all your pain go away.
Instead, if you can find just one thing worth a smile,
Perhaps on this thing you could write for a while?
Risk the road less traveled, step away from the trends,
And I think you'll find you're better off in the end.
You may call me a fool, say I don't understand
How this pain that you feel leaves things sordid and bland.
But the world's only this way when you make it so,
And I pray that, for your sake, you learn to let go.
Let there be no more tears overwhelming our words.
Let us write instead of smiles and laughter we've heard.
Write me a poem without broken hearts bleeding -
Now that, my friends, I call a poem worth reading.
- by Hunter of Legend |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Ode To Angst
- Artist: Hunter of Legend
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Description:
This is my response to the fact that I can't seem to find any poetry on Gaia that isn't full of angst.
Please keep in mind that I am not directing it at any one person, but at the angsty poetry population as a whole. Honest comments and critiques are appreciated! (Flaming, not so much...) - Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: angst response appeal cliche help
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Comments (5 Comments)
- gigglezninja - 07/04/2009
- thats so right. most of my favrite poems have sumthing to say or are about sumthing good....ecsept this one about people in the nut house
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- Rainbow cat FACE - 05/02/2009
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this is really well written, and for ONCE someone is using correct grammar and punctuation ^_^
i agree with this totally, but i feel more anger towards all those icky love poems xP they all say the same thing too, even if they are happy. - Report As Spam
- m!mi - 04/09/2009
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wow, WOW. amazingly written
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101071853#title
thats a poem i wrote a couple months ago. exact same message but hardly as well written. i can see you spent alot of time on this.
you definitly have my respect. again, love the message. - Report As Spam
- Owl18 - 12/12/2008
- I like it. ^.^ Good luck!
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- Hana_RedCrown - 12/12/2008
- "Is it very beautiful. I agree with every word. You are very skilled with your writing. I could see someone like you becoming very known in your later years." Nods and smiles politely.
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