car crash

• Artist: mayla34
• Description:
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: crash

car crash

frist virse:
you left
i didnt know what was going to happen next
you pulled out.
i heard a crash sound.
i ran out the front door and
see your car.

second:
i beging to cry
i thinking could this be the end
i ran
i scream call 911
you left this world

third:
why?
im scard
you left
and im alone

forth:
you wont be coming home
this christmass wil be lonley
why?
why did you half to leave

fith:
why did you go?
i cry
knowing you wont come home
i will wait
i will hold your hand
i wont let you go

sixth:
i will be with you
as you are taking your last breath
i say i love you
you smile than
you died
i began to cry.

Comments

[twilightlover81]

awww that was nice....and sad.
it was very good though. 4/5 =D

[NakedJack]

Doesn't flow that well, despite what the person below me says. Most bands create a melody before lyrics btw. If you are going to write lyrics first, you'll need to count your syllables so it will flow well.

[-BlackKiss16]

I like the flow & the words in this poem ^_^ Keep up the good work!