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You taught me everything I know.
And I'll let every last bit show.
I'm not ashamed of what you do,
It's just something that makes you, you.
See I don't like those things they say,
So I'll get strong and kill them one day.
You're my best friend, you should know,
My big, strong, best, awesome bro.
I see them hurt you now and then,
I wish I was stronger to kill those men.
One day they'll get what they deserve,
Because they've gotten on my last nerve.
I love you more than I can say,
I think of you every last day.
I'm afraid to see you cry,
It just makes me want to die.
I know you've taken every road,
But I know you'll come back home.
People say you're such a tramp,
But you are a great, great man.
You're now eighteen and left the home,
But you should know you're still my own.
I love you Rory, my big bro,
More than you will ever know.
Comments (3 Comments)
- zane104 - 12/03/2008
- I thought it had great rythme, but a few mistakes 4/5
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- Whookie - 11/30/2008
- i would say some mistakes in this poem but...im affraid ull kill me...like those other men....but all in all ill give it a....4/5
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- XxHuggles_KittensxX - 11/29/2008
- awww that's such a cute poem it almost mad me cry you did a really good job on making this poem.
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