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Rainy days wont fade away. Your disgusting face haunts me, you lied and lied and lied some more. You said you loved me, and you wouldent force me to do anything... But you did, stripping me of innocence, feeling and all. You only thought of sex, and used me to every extent, you only wanted one thing and you took it with pleasure, brain washing me to think I needed you. I hate you, youre a cold blooded user.
in the middle of misery, contemplating suicide. You appeared, stealing my stupid, shatterd, worthless heart, and calling it presious you repaired me and do not lie. You protect me, and love me. Forever will you hold me, when you kiss me my heart skips a beat, when u touch me my breath is stolen. Your words heal and revive, my true hero, a superman. My one and only beloved. heart
- by Toxic_Pinup_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: my pain, love, and life
- Artist: Toxic_Pinup_
- Description: its bout my life and everything thats happend 2 me,
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: pain love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Chrissy -27-20- - 12/01/2008
- I love this.Just like rockstar rock n roll,i'll tell you my poem,Alone.Please read and comment.thanks.
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- Beyond A Rebel - 11/30/2008
- it was reallhy good i liked it i hope you read my poem called love.and please comment it thanx
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- Klaora - 11/28/2008
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This has quite a bit of potential. However, please learn to spell and capitalize words that need to be capitalized. Break it up into more parts to make it flow better. Also, some sentences are run-ons. Others need verbs, of all things.
Also, the word "you" is spelled "y-o-u", not "u". Please fix that. Apostrophes would be nice, too.
You can make this one work. Salvage it and clean it up. I'd love to read it after you've done some proof-read - Report As Spam
- We_ Are_ Paramore - 11/28/2008
- that reminds me about my life
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- Doki O_O - 11/27/2008
- wow, u go gurl! XD ha ha ha! oh and im UR #1 fan! <33333 ^-^
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- joker459 - 11/27/2008
- one thing u forgot to mention the guy your talking about nah im jk >.< i like it ^_^ good job
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- Toxic_Pinup_ - 11/26/2008
- yay my bros also a fan ^_^ im so happy!!! ^_^
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