falling into darkness

• Artist: GenesisXII
• Description: i wrote this when i found out my gf cheated on me meh that b***h .... btw its a song sounds better with the actually music xComment it if a want cos i love to read them ^^ x
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: fallingintodarkness

pain .is even worse than hate!
more than you can never anticipate!
why would you care the fact that you ruined my life
not even understanding how much i sacrificed.
And now the end is here
there no more need for sorrow
now i see that there is no tommorow
cant help but feel im losing the fight with my sub-conscious
please stop me from falling .

At night i lay in wait, left in a lost sublminal state
Adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling
this seems of a loss of fate ,lost in my sublinal state
adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling

Are you still blaming me
for creating the anarchy
cant help but feel betrayed
or is it that ur just to afraid
its finally finished between us
And now the end is here
there no more need for sorrow
now i see that there is no tommorow
cant help but feel im losing the fight with my sub-conscious
please stop me from falling .

At night i lay in wait, left in a lost sublminal state
Adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling
this seems of a loss of fate ,lost in my sublinal state
adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling

your still scarring apart of me
so hard for you to let me go,
though youd let me drift into the darkness
can find a way to stop me from desecnding
it may be to late for you to anticipate
but for now its only just begun ...

At night i lay in wait, left in a lost sublminal state
Adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling
this seems of a loss of fate ,lost in my sublinal state
adrift in darkness
the walls are closing in ,and still i keep falling

Comments

[Feeling Strangely Fine]

b***h indeed, it's really well done...I'd love to hear it with music but whatever....btw you spent subliminal wrong about 9 times lol :] fantasic poem though.

[Slade II]

Nice work. You capture your emotions well.
p.s Im stealing these lyrics =) kthxbai

[Vshak]

your'e good. this poem really has a message about how we can feel so left out of life and slowly fall deep into paranoia and eventually depress ourselves till death