Bluebird

• Artist: rileybug96
• Description: This is the story of a bluebird that kinda of also describes life.
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: bluebird

As the bluebird sings,
it flaps it's wings
and flies of into a sea clouds.
It won't be back through out the winter,
you won't here it's spellbinding song.
Now it's spring and it is back
Though you still do not here its song.
Why you ask?
Now this lovely bluebird is in the clouds,
high above the ground.

Comments

[JodieUpton2009]

its a really gd poem,cupcakez is just mean most probably cos its better than what she could do! xx keep writing xx

[KCO_rocks]

very cool. Inspiration can come from the strangest places sometimes. and cupcakez is just a jealous meanie, she obviously doesnt know what she's doing.
check out my poems I have about 4-6 poems.

[khonnen]

I love it! It would help that birds fasinate me...Guess I'm just wierd. Great job. 4/5

[mayla34]

i love it. ive been wrighting since i remmeber. you can check my miteral out. serched this " when we were young" so yah all i can say is just keep on wrighting. smile

[Uh-Lhi-Suh]

i dont like it.... at all D:
maybe if you.....no..... its just terrible....