if only,if only...

• Artist: Xxmy emo hugs r freeXx
• Description: i don't know how to describe it... i wrote it in one of my hardest times and felt so relieved after words i hope you enjoy it as much of a hard time it was for me to write it...please leave a comment.
• Date: 11/18/2008
• Tags: ifonly ifonly

if only if only my heart would
stop breaking,if only if only people would stop breathing.
i love to remeber yet so often
i foreget.
i foreget what i learned.
i learned to stay to yourself i
learned to love.
love is what i learned it is so
beautiful.
beautiful is what it is,away of nature.
nature is a way of life.
life is away of that nobody understands.
LIKE ME
i love to remeber yet so often i
foreget,i foreget to live...

Comments

[cloud_ivy_17]

You might want to check your spelling...

[Fabulous Angel01]

Your like me i wrote a short poam called "If Only". i only have one coment on it, and I wrote the comment. I wish people would leave a comment on mine. sad

[kakashian2008]

I love your free flowing fealings displayed in this poem

[happysadgtttg]

try breaking up the lines so it makes sense

[Xxmy emo hugs r freeXx]

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