Death is not emo

• Artist: Taijia_Sango
• Description: This is in response to a comment I received on my poem entitled "I Bleed"
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: death pain hurt emotion

Why is writing about death 'emo'?
Is it because it's raw?
Maybe it's something you know
Either way how can you judge
What you cannot understand?
To throw a word around to sound smart
Makes you sound like a man
Who doesn't understand
That it is wrong to hit,
To yell, to scream, to possess,
To make others believe as you do.
You are wrong. Death is not emo
It is life.

Comments

[justcallmejack]

ur welcome =D
it was fun any ways xD
(she must be brain dead....)

[Taijia_Sango]

HAHAH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU guyonmybike!

[justcallmejack]

oh and...
Formosus Aestas?

WUT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[justcallmejack]

LUV IT!!!!!!!
i think i get the part on "it's life".
think i see where ur comin from

if we cant die then we cant really live?
can we?

[Taijia_Sango]

Why do you need everything spelled out for you? Can you not think for yourself? Life has many different meanings....The piint of the ending is for you to figure out for YOURSELF what that means. You really need to read and study poetry more. It is not suppose to be easily read into.....why do you think people study it so much. Please....educate yourself if you plan to be a critic.

[Formosus Aestas]

I take the same issues with this one. You don't really have a point. You're just complaining. Then there's that "death is life" thing. I am not unreasonable. If you can explain your reasoning, I will rate you a five. ("It's part of life" does not count, because that is not what you said.)

[hellraiser23]

your right talking about death doesnt mean any thing. As my girlfriend says 'emo' is just a state of mind its what you want it to be.