Mother Nature

• Artist: Maichanisacutie
• Description: I know this dosent rhyme but pomes are supposed to show passion so tell me what you think of my poem
• Date: 10/01/2008
• Tags: mother nature

Mother Nature

As the earth wakes in the early mourn
The birds sing and start to fly
The flowers rise to reach the sun
The animals come out
They get to work waking the others
As the flies buzz around and around
The seas kiss the horizon
The sun radiates off the plants
Mother Nature wakes to greet the world

Comments

[Tobias Theriac]

I quite like it. Very tranquil. Although it doesn't rhyme it does have a nice flow about it, and the imagery is nice. Good work!

(not sure about "The sun radiates of the plants" ? maybe a couple of different words in there? I'm no expert though.)