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When I see you, standing there
Deep blue eyes, golden hair
I feel so scared, and even if I'd dare
Talk to you, would you care?
When I see you, next to him
My head feels light, my world is dim
I feel so grim, but even if I’d dare
Talk to you, would you care?
When I see you, looking at me
Smiling back, looking so glee
I feel so happy, but even if I’d dare
Talk to you, would you care?
When I finally talk to you, and I ask
“Why so blue, why so grey?”
And you tell me, “It’s nothing, no reason to stay”
I’ll just tell you, “It’s okay, I care.”
- by thewhizkid103 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/17/2008 |
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- Title: Would you care?
- Artist: thewhizkid103
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Description:
I wrote this about a girl I had a crush on.
I never talked to her, but I found out she moved.
Ever since then, I always wished I did. - Date: 09/17/2008
- Tags: would care poem love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- jay942942 - 09/19/2008
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Awesome, I love it Nick!
Write another soon, will ya? - Report As Spam
- detroitpistons32 - 09/17/2008
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booo! you stink! youre a softy! boo!!
heheh. just kidding whiz. its very nice - Report As Spam
- DoctorProfessorScone_526 - 09/17/2008
- wow, i couldn't write anything like that. that was touching and cute.
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- Poopsie_Monkey - 09/17/2008
- ;P
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- thewhizkid103 - 09/17/2008
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Heh...
Thanks so much guys!
Yeah, it's a shame...
I miss her. She was such a nice girl... - Report As Spam
- ficuslady - 09/17/2008
- wow...that's deep. ah so sorry you never talked to her. maybe you'll see her again one day. and if you do talk to her!
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- ficuslady - 09/17/2008
- wow...that's deep. ah so sorry you never talked to her. maybe you'll see her again one day. and if you do talk to her!
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