Look At Me

• Artist: raven_christina
• Description: Let me all know what you think. It's an experimental idea, and I am deliberately playing with the format. The italics are meant to be my innermost thoughts. Comments are appreciated!
• Date: 09/16/2008
• Tags: look

Well it could have gone worse
I thought
sitting here, playing with chains of staples
Ka-c***k, ka-c***k
linking them
[string of boredom
random thoughts]
Your hair was down
kept feeling it brush on my skin
sitting beside me
I could die.
[Dear Lord Help Me]
Outside of class my body
tight drum
collapsed against walls
[Breathe in out]
releasing tension.
Green eyes forever fixed
a somewhat sleepy gaze
[not ugly by any means]
I'm going to explode every time you look.
Another staple chain done
laid out
starting the next one
[anything to keep my mind free]
Like a fool
lovestruck dumb
I'm talking too much
[please say something]
I have no hold
on my control
[don't go too fast, he said]
remind myself
slowly, slowly
4 chains
I'm out of staples
[******** now what?]
now what?
Asking me
your voice
in my head
Now what?

Comments

[tigerdilly]

wow, i really like it... i think anyone could relate to it, and i think everyone's been there. vulnerably cute. whee
keep up the great work!

[Lord of Omni]

i like it. a boy sitting link staples and a beautiful girl want to talk and has know idea what to do. i think we have all been there. very good 5/5