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Back then you were my friend
Back then I was your lover
All I wanted was you
And not some creepy other
I didn't know your feelings
But I saw through all the lies
and those are some things
I hated and despised
But then that horrible day
You said we can't be together
Friend we would never stay
Cuz you had some better
I saw you for another year or two
Passing by with nothing to say
But then over summer I moved
And now I just couldn't stay
My heart started to mend
And I lived on
Though lately I lie and pretend
Because I pass you in the halls again
I miss you for now
And probably forever
And if I were to die I'd have one last request
To talk to you like we are best friends again
- by Twilight Obsessed Fan |
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- | Submitted on 09/10/2008 |
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- Title: Whats gunna happen now
- Artist: Twilight Obsessed Fan
- Description: I have no idea what im typing so comment and rate nicely and check out my other poems
- Date: 09/10/2008
- Tags: whats gunna happen
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- xxFang Diachixx - 09/10/2008
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- Online Violation - 09/10/2008
- That actually sounds a lot like the situation I'm going through. It's really well structured. The only complaint I have is using "Cuz" instead of 'Cause, it just makes it sound more professional. You rhymed perfectly as well. It's actually a fantastic poem :3
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