I write poems for a living

• Artist: anti-angelic-angel
• Description: this is called observer, its a poem I wrote like when I was 8
• Date: 08/29/2008
• Tags: write poems living

Can you hear the breath of the observer
Can you hear the quanta calling back?
The arguments of motivation
Implore my distant muse to act
Sentiment spent on emotions
Derived from our eternal spark
All beyond our comprehension
Watching protons in the dark


All the love and all the hatred
Split from our desire to be
All the love and all the hatred
Leading to hostilities
All the saints and all the prophets
All the secrets that you keep
Exist with one inriguing question
Tell me dearest - who are we?

Can you hear the gears of evolution
Grinding for divinity
Can you hear the voices of creation
And the science sprawling from the seas
Sentiment spent on emotions
Derived from our eternal spark
All beyond our comprehension
Watching protons in the dark

All the love and all the hatred
Lovers searching for the seed
That piece of existential knowing
That gives tomorrow wings to dream
All the broken-hearted angels
Living in the ether seams
All the love and all the hatred
Tell me dearest - who are we?

Comments

[Panic Pirate]

Your wrote in the 8th GRADE perhaps? But it's good

[OmgNoodles]

i doubt u wrote it when u were 8, but it's still a great poem (much better than i could write)!

[SogniDeAnima]

nice vocab...i luv edward scissorhands, btw, yay JD!