Both are the same

• Artist: Brett Casey
• Description: Jus something i wrote up in 11th grade
  
  was feeling very confused most my friends say i got some talent at this so i wanna see what strangers think.
• Date: 08/24/2008
• Tags: bothsame

brain of the heart
heart of the brain
both are the same
but both play a different game
both can drive u insaine
both can cause you pain
but wut u gain
is worth the pain
like the experience of love
and the knowledge of wut is above
the only thing different between them is there location
but they have the same occupation
to keep u alive
is the 1 thing they cant deprive.

Comments

[Estarine Zephaloid]

Very good. Yeah, it would have a better effect if it wasnt text-talk, but written out well. But it's really good.

[pheonix31119]

Learn to spell what...poem doesn't have to ryhme to be a poem.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

nice poem. and yea u do got talent, u should spread around more ^^

[Something_Terrible]

It is a very nice poem....some constructive criticism though: try to refrain from using 'txt' speach like wut instead of what and u instead of you etc.