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I wake up at phoenix rise
and am captivated by the subliminal beauty
of the sky, orange and pink.
Sun shines red, the devil's eye
glaring balefully above,
scorching me under its merciless gaze.
Every second, minute, and hour
is spent in profound reverie
that clouds my eyes with dreamy mist.
But I am not immune to angst,
for somewhere, in this damned land,
a monster has risen from the umbra.
War, like an angry dragon,
looms menacingly ahead,
waiting to shatter this dream of silence.
God rid me of suspense!
I can feel every fear of my comarades
and pray to high Empyrean that I will survive.
It's past the time to reconcile now,
the king's eyes, ravenous, are of fire
and his heart carved of jagged ice.
We were once the sheep, he the shepard
who governed us under false justice
to satiate his selfish desires.
He sits in grandeur atop his throne
in the manner of a god.
At our despair, his laugh resonates
and each day he tightens those binding chains
restricting our birthright to freedom.
This tyrant we pledge to overcome.
Everything changes lightning-fast.
Through the gnarled wood I hear
the Regulars' pompous drums,
and I can see their uniform, vibrant red
as they march surely and proudly
across unknown terrain.
Their eyes mirror no empathy,
and their expression haughty.
This struggle signifies nothing to them
who were born in that land of monarchy,
but it means everything to us
to declare our emancipation.
As the battle commences, all fear is gone
to be eclipsed by a mutual contempt.
Mother, please forgive me if I die,
I know I promised to come home.
Realize, though, escape is futile
when Death is so persistent.
My eyes see smoke and blood,
and I hear the roar of muskets,
piercing the humid air.
I also hear the scream of death,
all through out the battlefield.
But worse, I find it escaping from my throat.
Screaming, I echo despair
shivering in pain upon the ground.
It is pain far beyond anything I've felt,
burning hot into my flesh,
hotter than red Sun
glaring balefully above.
Current pandemonium has frozen,
so pain is my only companion
as my world begins to fade.
Sudden realization dawns
that I won't come home alive
or yet live another hour.
My consciousness runs free with my blood,
escaping this doomed body
yearning to fly.
Too early my fight is over
and nothing matters anymore
as my mind slips into darkness.
Oh blessed darkness,
which nullifies the pain,
free me from this infernal prison!
I feel myself spiraling through the gyre,
down to the Dark Abyss.
Where is the light?
Blue moon unshrouds the heavy darkness
penetrating through the window with her pallid light.
She seems a phantom, so ghostly
amongst the star-strewn night.
Her smile is full of sadness,
and her lurid face dour.
I can feel the loneliness
she's suffered since yore.
I too am lonely.
I have missed the great exodus,
the mass departure of souls
quick to catch the gales to nirvana.
I feel a sense of guilt as I lay here
with fire gnawing at my wounds.
It feels so wrong to be alive,
though It is only God's will that sometime
I may walk the bridge to home
but now seems not His choice.
The stagnant air is tainted by blood
shed copiously at Breed Hill.
All about me is agony,
yet also triumph.
We payed the price in blood,
but how much more men will freedom cost?
- Title: Red Sun, Blue Moon
- Artist: SiShi-Ga
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Description:
This poem is based on the Revolutionary War, precisely Bunker Hill. It's about a soldier who is wounded and thinks he's dying, but wakes up in a hospital.
I know it's long, but I had fun writing it - Date: 07/23/2008
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- Black Ski - 01/06/2009
- agreed.
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- rampagejoe - 12/22/2008
- shizzle man that was clean .........who has two thumbs and loves this poem (points thumbs at himself) THIS GUY
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