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• Artist: ninja-kyoko-chan
• Description: if you actually think about it, this poem is supposed to be the opinion of your reflection, though you don't know until the end
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: mirror

I see a girl
Standing there
With my outfit
And my hair

I copy her moves
Every one
So does my moon
So does my sun

Some say that
I am her soul
But I insist
She is my goal

To be free
To move around
To be able
To make a sound

No longer shall
I move as such
Is something I
Wish for so much

Do I hate her?
Yes, I do.
But then again,
So would you.

A puppet on
A string am I
Behind the mirror
A silent sigh

They say that if
I copy right
I can escape;
I'll win the fight

I'll be free
To make a sound
To breathe the air
To touch the ground

And when I'm free
If you don't mind
I'll find a mirror
And I will find

Another girl
Who will be free
But only if
She copies me

Comments

[stripedXheart13]

This is just wonderful 5 stars 4 u

[Wolfspellcaster]

It's a really great poem. smile

[Foaly51]

only 2 seconds ago? wow. (haha im back. i like it so much that i had to read i again!!) XD

[Feareaper]

I really like it
its easy to read

[ninja-kyoko-chan]

i love how i wrote this two seconds ago

[Foaly51]

wow, that's good biggrin love the rhythm and rhymes

[Cathedral Az]

Wow! That's awesome. I really liked it.