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She sat there all alone,
Crying all alone on the cold stone floor.
He could hear the damage he'd done,
To this pure white angel.
"These are the cries of an angel?" He thought to himself.
Her Angelic crystal tears were ignored,
By the one she loved.
The one she adored.
He really hated her and used her,
For his own benefit.
How could he break her fragil heart?
Because he doesn't care.
She cries and cries but nobody'll listen,
This is because the selfish prince will not allow them to.
But she has had enough.
She's tired of crying.
She's outta tears.
She runs away from the dark castle toward the Heavens.
Her tears making a trail.
But this never happened.
In the end, all he did was look at her,
And see her hurt.
But in the end all he did was close the door
- by Gyaru-Ritsuka no Kitsune |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- LovesNotReal - 08/08/2010
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this is somthing that would describe me perfect bu taside from that it was great
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- vampire_fetish15 - 02/12/2009
- aww i love it! >.< the end almost made me cry.
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- onlinepunk - 01/28/2009
- Wow this is amazing!!!!! I totally love this poem. Beautiful and amazing.
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- member_of_the_FFA - 07/19/2008
- i give you an A+ it is very beautiful
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- The French Kitty - 07/19/2008
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It's quite a lovely poem I think. However there is a spelling error here that you may want to fix.
How could he break her fragil heart?
I really like the idea behind this poem and I can visualise everything happening as I read each line. I think that you're a promising writer and maybe with just a little bit of work you can really write anything you set your mind on.
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- Stirfry247 - 07/19/2008
- wow very pretty
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