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there is one feeling
everyone shares
the simple feeling
when no one cares
alone in darkness
our heart feels sorrow
it's breaking apart
will we make it till tomorrow
one simple action
a smile or wave
makes our hearts fly
out of the darkness of the cave
now your heart is healing
it's coming back together
our life has some meaning
your sorrow is light as a feather
your one meaning in life
is to make them smile
and when you make them cry
your heart is full of bile.
they leave you all alone
the darkness seeps back in
they are gone forever
you life is just a whim
the darkness reaches its max
your sadness reaches its height
the blade slices your arm
then everything becomes night.
all is bright
nothing is dark
your entire body
is just a thousand little scars
alone you spend your days
wishing they were there
except for that one thought
your mind is completely bare
waiting for the day
the day that you can die
you go mad insiede this cell
until the day you see their eye
strapped around your back
your jacket holds you tight
all of the walls are padded
you cannot even fight
you dream of them in sleep
your miserable when your awake
why couldn't you have finished the job
when your life you tried to take
the voices scream in your head
they make every thing worse
until that one day
when death arrives in a hearse
your life is over now
you see them in the light
your complete once again
your love can re-unite.
- by demented_crow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: alone is how it ends
- Artist: demented_crow
- Description: a poem about going through life.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: alone depressed
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LittleNewcomb - 12/21/2008
- holy crap thats good... i dont write in fixed lyrics... i wish i could... this is simply beautiful...
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 12/21/2008
- It is...wow...deppressing but thats my mood right now and I think this is a very good written story so 5 stars from me... 3nodding
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- XminionX - 10/02/2008
- good job
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- Anzthuniel - 09/28/2008
- That's a really good and deep poem. I love it, it's so .. wow! I can't put words to it. Keep up the good for 5 start from me.
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- Ungoliath - 07/20/2008
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Depressing indeed, but is the motivation of this writing. Anyway, I like this one than the other...There is, however, some points to make:
This time you HAD a story, wich is good. This time grammar was coorect, wich is great. But this time I couln't feel nothing. It was boring in some phrases. It was "messy" in some paragraphs.
I see you as a writer still growing, this kind of things will be better just with time. Now is just something to read one time only. - Report As Spam
- Vampirebloodlust101 - 07/17/2008
- very good but a little depressing. neutral
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- demented_crow - 07/17/2008
- plz. comment.
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