Starry Winter's Night

• Artist: Ur_Gonna_Go_Far_Kid
• Description: This is a poem from a friend of mine, told to me a long time ago.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: starry winters night

Sitting by the window

on a lonley winter's night

The stars are shining brightly

there's not a cloud up in the sky

The tears are streaming freely

down her cheeks from her blue eyes

Everybody seems to hate her

They all fill her full of lies

Those scars on her arm are proof

of the troubled life she's had

and no one seems to understand

Just why she is so sad

They say that she has everything

but then they just don't see

all the lonliness so deep inside

revealed only by her dreams

Years and years of this lonley life

Go by with the speed of light

Then her mom finds a note one day

She had takn her own life...

Comments

[Publius Virgilius Marco]

This is a brilliantly emotional poem, though it needs some work on its form. Either way, I could not help but give it a five.

[Eternall-X-Darkness]

Its Awesome.
Kinda Sad...
Go Emo!! ~~

[[.Crazy.You.Say.]]

That's very emotional. But Very fabulous awesome job!