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I stand alone. The bitter break of dawn
Is seeping through the blanket made of ash.
I taste the putrid, ling'ring sulfur on
My tongue as it would leave a spotted rash.
Beneath me lie the conquered and the strong
For not a one would dare survive this day;
A little boy still plays his marching song
As he marches slowly through the gray.
I hear the mothers' whimpers in my ears;
They dare not cry for fear they'll lose their souls.
If only there was nothing left to hear,
But softly does the death bell make its tolls.
I stand alone. The bitter break of dawn
Reminds me that my time has come and gone.
- Title: I Stand Alone
- Artist: Casca 7
- Description: This is just a poem I wrote for one of the poem competitions before this arena opened up. It didn't win, but oh well. Tell me what you think.
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- supernaturalforever - 08/21/2009
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loved it
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- UC Poika - 05/06/2009
- good,but I liked the other one better
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 03/01/2009
- Quite a solid poem. Strong imagery, smooth and vivid word choice, and an overall presented idea that is mentally palatable. 3.75/5.
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- muscular killing pie - 12/29/2008
- wows sounds GOTHIC!!!! Its okayish....
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- Courgette - 07/18/2008
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I love it!
*gives Casca her rabbit to cheer her up*
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- Takorokku - 07/17/2008
- This poem is nice. I don't care what those judge people might of said, but I love it^^
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- Crystalinemoon - 07/16/2008
- I like it alot...it for some reason remids me of silent hill. Thank-you for voting on my entry I'm glad you knew it was symbolism. ^^
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