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Life is a daily battle and one we all must face,
For some can rise above it all,
While others fall from grace.
We start the struggle early and learn
along the way,
That for every path to glory,
There is another that leads away.
Each day that passes brings us close
to that one final call,
For the choices that we make each day
determine where we fall.
To walk and straight and narrow path and
choose what's only right,
Can keep us safe, secure and loved
by Heaven's adorning light.
But to error is human and human is
what we are,
And for that meek and simple fact
we won't get very far.
But now the end is drawing near and
our judgment call is made.
For those who've walked on Heaven's path
and for those who always strayed.
For Hell is open to everyone
with a large and smiling face ...
But Heaven is only open ....
to the One's Who've Aced The Race.
- by Angel of Forgotten Souls |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: Acing the Race
- Artist: Angel of Forgotten Souls
- Description: Just a poem that I entered in a Guild Contest - Theme was Heaven and Hell ..
- Date: 07/27/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Guidetotheunderworld - 07/27/2008
- SWEET !! Your rule angel hunny bunny!
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- Voice of the Blood - 07/27/2008
- My sweet Angel Bunny - you amaze me !! A perfect 5 star rating from me to you as always!
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- kkkthnksbye - 07/27/2008
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very very very very very very very very good job 99999/99999
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- Kookyfan - 07/27/2008
- Awesome poem!!!Good job!^^
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- Marcus of Blood Manor - 07/27/2008
- Wonderful job Angel Bunny ! Where is your next one ??
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- xMoonsaultx - 07/27/2008
- It had a few problems with meter at first but it worked itself out toward the end. This is better then most of the poems then I've seen in the arena. And, it wasn't just centered round love. I give you 5 stars because it's that good.
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- pcoultsyo - 07/27/2008
- Oh my god... wonderful! Great poem smile It has a lot of meaning to it too. Good job Angel!
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