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Return to me my Gabrielle!
I miss you
i long for you
tu es ma mere*
your flowing red hair
will comfort me
just come for me!
i want you...
Jacquelyn! my little red head
Jacquelyn! you showed me the udead
now show yourself to me now!
come onto my stage, enter my cage
just show yourself to me now!
somehow you elude me
though I look so hard to find
by now I start to wonder
were you only in my mind
is it wrong of me
to want to see you?
is it so dumb
to want to love you?
come to me... my Gabrielle
come to me... my Gabrielle
Return to me my Gabrielle!
[In my dreams I hold her still
Angel, Lover, Mother
and in my dreams I kiss her lips
Mistress, muse, daughter
she gave me life
I gave her death
my beautiful Marquise
and on the Devil's Road we walked
two orphans together!
and does she hear my hymns tonight
of kings and queens and ancient truths
of broken vows and sorrows
or does she climb some distant path
where rhyme and song cant follow?
come back to me my Gabrielle
my beautiful Marquise
the castle's ruined on the hill
the village lost beneath the snow
but you are mine forever]
Return to me my Gabrielle!
beautiful
truely innocent
evil
yet magnificent
lovely
in the moonlight as she kills
lonely
ripped apart against my will
Blood! heal my wounds
Blood! under the moon
Death! can never touch us
Death! was left behind
now show yourself to me now
come into my hell, we'll scream and we'll yell
just show yourself to me now!
Return to me my Gabrielle
Return to me...
Return to me...
my...love
- by SilvertongueSagittarius |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Return to me my Gabrielle
- Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
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Description:
it's a song I wrote due to the loss of a good friend. It was inspired by Anne Rice's books: [u]The Vampire Lestat[/u] and [u]Queen of the Damned[/u]
so part of the lyrics were writen by Rice and I'll need to get her permission
before releasing this song.(Rice's lyrics in brackets)
I know someone will ask this so here: Jacquelyn is the name of my friend but if you've read those books I mentioned, you'd understand the symbolism of the name Gabrielle
*the french part means "you are my mother" - Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/23/2008
- thank you dark tears. and Ivana, it IS NOT POETRY! it is lyrics. one has the ability to change the sounds of words slightly. and besides, the only forced rhymes were "dumb/love" and maybe "wounds/moon" although that wasnt an intentional rhyme...it just kinda ended up that way
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- xXxDarktearsxXx - 07/22/2008
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I love it, from the style you chose and the words you chose deliberately for it. Its so sad and sweet at the same time...
I would love to read more! ^^ - Report As Spam
- Atheshya - 07/22/2008
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It's a little better than the average love poem. It has a little more subject matter than usual, a couple of fairly interesting lines, and it uses names instead of an ambiguous 'you'. But still...
It's not that well written.
The most interesting parts aren't even written by you.
There's not much imagery, though it looks as if you tried.
The rhyming is forced.
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- Rikku Mage - 07/20/2008
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Wow...
I loved it soooooo sooooo much!!!
I wish I could write like you do!! - Report As Spam
- xxevil_poptartsxx - 07/17/2008
- i love the use of the '!' in like every sentance.seems very....excited? no thats not it.....i cant explain.....stupid waffles! ok ok i am a camara! ooooh! WHATS THAT?!
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