fallin angel

• Artist: deathdragon009-alucard
• Description: dark
• Date: 09/12/2008
• Tags: fallin angel

Slowly I breathe looking at the ceiling i sleep olny a short time . i think alot my brain never shuts down as i run RPGs in my head. I almost never truly sleep. So i lay here. I live in darkness, like a vampire scared of the light Loneliness is my life every one can't see it . No one really cares if i'm in pain. They see only a part of me . I'm a falling angel, with no path accept the path I make. For I am the angel of Death.

Comments

[gruodon999]

wow u nailed a lot of stuff in my life ecept the pain i seem to enjoy it and i welcome the lonelyness a** for death how can u live with the constant threat of death a fearful life is not a life at all so great poem and i welcome u death angel to try to kill meI kinda see what your saying at the beginning but you dont really make it lead up to the end. You say everyone cant see it and then you say your the angel of death. the angel of death kills ppl dude so... maybe a little revising? Very nice

[gruodon999]

buang ka

[Gishwaisgod]

wow u nailed a lot of stuff in my life ecept the pain i seem to enjoy it and i welcome the lonelyness a** for death how can u live with the constant threat of death a fearful life is not a life at all so great poem and i welcome u death angel to try to kill me

[blondecutie1234]

i liked it at the end!!!! mostly the end, the beginning was ok. add me! me: blondecutie1234.

[sydcole]

I kinda see what your saying at the beginning but you dont really make it lead up to the end. You say everyone cant see it and then you say your the angel of death. the angel of death kills ppl dude so... maybe a little revising? Very nice tho I like the RPGs in my head... lolz very thoughtful

[Halick]

i love this poem :3

[HurtRebelChick]

FAB!