Hidden Tears

• Artist: Mary_Tops
• Description: I was very depressed a week ago so i went to the computer and wrote this in about 2 minutes.
  
  I love writting poetry, when i am alone, in my head i am always talking in poetry.
  
  This one helped me to express my emotions and feel better. Thought it didn't crue my depression it sure did help alot.
  
  
  ENJOY!
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: hurt tears hidden dark feelings

Is someone there?
Is someone near?
Can anyone see my
Hidden tears?
Can anyone hear my misery?
Is anyone there?
Is anyone near?
I question it every day
My reason for existence.
I hope there is a rope
And at the other end
A friend
But friends are an illusion
You think they are true
Then you hear things they say
Then you hear what they think of you
Is a friend somewhere?
Is there one out there for me?
Is someone there?
Is someone near?
Can anyone see?
My hidden tears?

Is there someone out there to help me.
Please
Please
let there be
my angle in waiting
to rescue me

Comments

[Screamo herb]

wow i think this is super deep that i'm goin to give it a 5/5 and ******** WHAT Teedey and cloffing say they don't know true art

[Teedey]

yes i agree 1 star

[Cloffing Pempslider]

1 star.

Learn something about writing actual poetry, rather than tearful emo rants.

[MeIanite]

I understand exactly what this pooem is talking about i feel it everyday, it almost made me cry thanks for writing this i love it 5/5

[xX_Zara_Xx]

i like it ^-^
but you should've sperated it at parts so that its not all clumped together
and as for your depression prob, just think of all the good times ONLY.
dont giv me any crap about "i can't think of any good times! my mind is only filled with the bad times"
like, think about the times we went wild waves and the times we laughed smile
it'll help combat the depression

[crystal_of_darkness]

I know exactly how you feel. And I too write when i'm emotional. It helps. I dont know why. it just did.

[Ija Jonas]

i like your poem.. especially the part about friends.. it really do hit me because thats what some of my friends did