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"Ahhhhhh!" The high pitch scream rang across the walls of the ally. The vampire was feeding. I walked as quiet as a cat. My feet barely touching the ground. One qiuck stab. Thats all it took to kill a vampire. One qiuck stab with a stake. I moved forward slowly. Two feet in closing. My chance was now. I flipped over the vampires head with my knees tucked in and landed perfectly. The moon made shine like a black angel. My body acted before my brain did. My shoes skided across the ground as i slammed the vampire into the ally wall. I pulled out a stake and stabbed the vampire in the chest.
"what is you're name?" I asked.
"Leon. you'res?" "he" replied.
"you don't need to know." I said as i stabbed "leon" through "his" cold dead heart. If "he" had one. blood spilled all over my hands and the ground. I pulled out an essence candle and lit it on fire and then i dropped it on the vampires body. The wind blew away most of the flames but left a kitten face made of flames. That was my mark. The smell of lavender hit the air as i turned torward the girl. Her long blonde hair glowed in the moonlight. I reached down touched it. It felt like pure silk that grew a little past her shoulders. She was most likley 5'6 and was probaly bout 25 wears old. She had big breasts that could get her any guy or vampire. She was also intoxicated. The vampire must have though of her as easy prey.
- by pinatamaster |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/05/2010 |
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- Title: forrbiden love (revised)
- Artist: pinatamaster
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Description:
this is a revised version of my story. it has more details cuz most of my freinds said i needed more details.
please rate,add comments,and tell me what i need to do to improve this peice. - Date: 06/05/2010
- Tags: forrbiden love revised
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