Gretchen the ghoul seedrian

• Artist: Cosmo Seed
• Description: This is a story of the title.
• Date: 12/23/2009
• Tags: gretchen ghoul seedrian

I was eight when I was turned into a ghoul. Me and my father were walking to the mall when a light brighter then you could ever imagine. I woke up a few hours later. I found my father's shadow burned into the concrete. The city was on fire for weeks I hid in the mall. It was one of the few buildings that wasn't burning or falling down. The other people of the city howled everyone was looting, killing and dying. Most turned into super mutants. The super mutants pushed me and my friends underground. We started the city of Underworld within the museum of that mall. It was mostly inside an exhibit about Hell and what not. The super mutants took everyone but me and my five friends. My friend Sierra's little sister Brie is still alive we saw her on a mutant's back sleeping. Please they are attacking the city but we have no defenses. crying Please save us! *large crash* They found me hurry! *Screen goes black*

Comments

[King2908]

That was a very good story that can pass to be a good book you should make a bigger story

[Moth of Ucker]

That writing is so tragedy...you had good sense on those