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She awoke hearing a terrifying sound coming from her closet. The noise was getting louder and louder and louder. She swinged her legs out of bed, and stood up. She grabbed a pair of shorts from her drawer and pulled them on. She looked for her slippers. She noticed they were near her closet. She was too scared to go even close to the closet. So she left them and left her room. She went to the kitchen and looked at the time. It was 6 o’clock in the morning. Her parents already left for work. She took a deep breath and went back to her room. She slowly walked towards her closet where the noise came from. She opened the door and looked around. She walked in and then the door shut. She screamed and ran to the door. It was stuck, she couldn't open it. The lights began to flicker and then they went out. The vampire crept towards her making sure she didn't hear him. He opened his mouth to reveal long and sharp looking fangs. He grabbed her neck and pierced her with his sharp fangs. The taste of the warm blood tasted nice and rich. He hadn't had blood for almost a weak. He tried to stop but he just couldn't.
An hour has passed and the girl was dead. He open the door of the closet and went to the bedroom window. He opened it gently and jumped out as if he was a cat. At 12 o’clock in the afternoon her parents came back and found her dead. They assumed it was a animal attack because the window was open and there was blood everywhere. Nobody knows what happen to there poor friend. Nobody except the vampire. He is waiting to strike again. But with who? He doesn't know. Just anybody who's life seems perfect. On October 30, 2007 Dakota had died of a animal attack. The End.
- Title: The Night The Vampire Awoke.
- Artist: iiiNerd
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Description:
I just read a terrifying book by Stephan King, so i decided to write my own short story. Enjoy and please no trolling. Rate and leave a comment.
=^-^= - Date: 10/04/2009
- Tags: night vampire awoke scary
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LovesNotReal - 05/26/2010
- It was great!I JUST LOOOOOVE story's about my own kind!~
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- Thigocia - 10/13/2009
- Um. Why was the vampire sleeping in her closet?
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- Prompt Adieu - 10/04/2009
- I see a few minor spelling errors. Try to revise your sentences; there were many sentences that started with "She" this and "She" that. Also instead of blunt details, write out the descriptions so there's something for the mind to create. Lastly, his name is STEPHEN King. 2/5.
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