I'm Only A Little Girl

• Artist: phresh_swagga15
• Description: This is a short story but it's really great.Enjoy and please rate.
• Date: 07/28/2009
• Tags: only little girl

I'm only a little girl.Why would you do this mommy.I saw mommy I saw.That's the words I spoke in the attic when my mom shot my uncle Adam.She spoke "If you really love mommy you have to forget what you saw".How could you do this to me mommy?I'm only a little girl.Ever scine that night Iv'e been having nightmares.The nightmares are about that night mommy!!Do you even care?Youv'e been putting lies into my head.Just so you can save your self.What kind of a mother are you?But little did I know you were doing it.But yet I stilled loved you and was attchated to you.Why mommy?Why?I'm only a little girl.
I'm only a sweet little girl heart

Comments

[thatkittygurl008]

ya, more detail, but other else than that wow, you should continue on from that part, that was good

[Faerie]

You could make this into a story/poem.
Maybe make things rhyme and make a bit more sense.
Add more detail.
This has potential to be a poem.!~