- today i went on a date,which does happen alot,so i didnt expect anything different,movie,dinner,car ride,sex.but i should expect it cause its my girlfriend that it keeps happening with.we went to see public enemies(not really a date movie but we both wanted to see it) and then we went to a italian restaurant,and i went to go to my car,when all of a sudden a (what i found out to be a frying pan) something hit me on my head,and i fell over.and this retard grabs sophie(whos actually a really good fighter) and brings him to his car and starts to drive,i got up and started to run to the car which gained speed really fast,but im a extremely fast runner,i was mvp for my track team, i kept running and he stopped about 15 blocks away,not knowing i was still following,now i was pissed,i saw that sophie was trying to put up a fight,but it wasnt any use and the guy (who i found out his name is tim sayaside) was gonna rape her,but i kicked in his windsheild and threw him out of the car ounto pavement,which had to heart considering he was naked except for this boxers.he tried to get up but i shoved my left fist into his ribcage and he threw up and fell over(i was also mvp for our boxing and wrestling team) he twitched then tried to get up again,one of my friends who was happening to walk by grabbed him and i stood parrallel to him,he threw him towards me and i thrusted my fist into timmys face,he flipped over and hit the floor and started coughing,i told my friend he could go,he tried to get up again,but i took a bat that was in his car and uppercut him with it, and he passed out,(this was a longer fight than most of mine,i usually punch them out really fast,if i gave him a direct punch to the face it wouldve been a punchout)i pissed on him,and then i got in the car,and closed the door.i turned to sophie who was still sitting there half naked,and i helped her get dressed and then we drove to the restaurant,i lit his cars interior on fire,and we took my car,and drove to her house.i already told you what usually happens after the car ride so i dont have to explain that. razz
- Title: dont mess
- Artist: yuki609
- Description: dont mess with anyone i know
- Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: dont mess
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- yuki609 - 09/19/2009
- non fiction,and actually you can break a windsheild with your foot,you just need to have muscle,you know the thing buried under all your fat
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- Robot Squirrel - 08/30/2009
- You couldn't break a car windsheild with a HAMMER, let alone your foot...even if this is just in the wrong section, it still is kind of fail. The plot is alright but you need to work on your literacy skills.
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- Vibrant Danie - 08/12/2009
- That was kinda funny... Still good though. Is it fiction???
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- Mr Jimmy Teh King - 08/01/2009
- Non Fiction?
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