- “This train..it seems so familiar like i’ve been on it before.” Mitsuki was sitting staring at the inside of the train looking over at the people next to her. “Those four,what where there names again? Oh yes Jake,Light,Freddy,and Diane. I wonder why they are all here to.” Mitsuki scooted on her seat closer to them. “Um..excuse me,may i ask why we are all on this train together?” The four just stared at her. “Didn’t you get a letter explaining all of this?” Jake pulled out his letter and handed it to her. “Here read this.” Mitsuki took the letter and read it to herself:”Dear Jake,You and five others have been chosen to be in a competition. This competition is not a usual competition. It will test all of your strengths and weakness’s.” She kept reading the letter and stared up at shock. “T-the last lines of the letter:”And then there was none.” What does it mean... And then there were none?” Mitsuki shook as she handed Jake the letter back. “Y-yes i got one of those letters but mine said i was chosen to go on my very own dream vacation.” Jake turned around to the others and asked what there letters said. Before Jake turned back around there was a scream and the train flipped. Everyone inside the train was flying up and down,hitting the roof of the train and then the floor. “What the hell is going on!?” Mitsuki was fixing to scream help as loud as she could but the train began rolling more. “We are rolling down a cliff. W-where are the others?” Mitsuki didn’t see anyone there.. it was just her..alone. She looked at the train’s windows and saw one of them was broken. “The impact must have sent someone threw the window.” The train finally came to a stop and she hit the bottom of the train hard. “s**t why the hell is this happening?” She couldn’t stand so she crawled to the front of the train and looked into the drivers cabin. The driver was in a belt,with a knife threw the back of his neck,and his eyes gauged out. “W-what the hell is this? Some kind of damn horror movie!?” Mitsuki crawled to the window that was busted out and looked outside.There was a house just across from where the train was. “I-i wonder if the others got out and went there?” Mitsuki crawled out of the window getting glass stuck into her wrists and her legs. “s**t!” she winced as she crawled through all the broken glass on the ground. She got to a tree and stood up holding against it. She just looked at the train. “Could this had been planned?” She started walking toward the house when she heard Jake’s voice. “Mitsuki! H-help me.” Mitsuki turned around and saw Jake’s body laying underneath the train. “Oh no. Jake!” Mitsuki limped over to Jake and kneeled down beside his head. “Where are the others?” Jaked looked up at her and smiled. “What?” She looked at him with shock. She was stabbed through her back as she bent down to help him. “Sorry mitsuki.” Jake laughed madly and the train started rolling again. “N-” the train rolled over jake and squashed him. Blood was all over the train. The train barely missed the house but it kept rolling. “And then There were none”
- Title: The Haunting Of jesse Lawless
- Artist: iSonic
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This is the prologue of My murder/horror/mystery story about a young boy who is haunted by his dreams that come true when he wakes up.
This part of the story is a dream of Jesse's. He doesn't know what to think of it so he ignores it. I am currently working on chapter 1 so this will kind of leave u at a cliffhanger. O.O thanks for spending your time to read my story. - Date: 05/15/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Rian_Lena - 06/13/2009
- I swear none of you people read a dictionary! This is non fiction, which means real, current events, actually things that have happened. Fiction is where you put this in.
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- iSonic - 05/15/2009
- Lol,I finished chapter 1. O.O want a preview dante?
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- Murderous God - 05/15/2009
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Weird... <.<
I think I'm scared of trains ATM. XP - Report As Spam