- There came that stranger that walks along to the door to my front house. As I watched my sospitions rise to the peak of my mind, and to no matter how much I did and didn't know about why he walked to my front door without a knock. While I saw him looking like a robber with his knives in his pocket and a small handgun(I knew by the smell of lead). I walked down to my living room slowly trembling as the thought of why I see that stranger outside on my front deck. I was about to see who he was but he was finally able to give my door a gentle knock, I decided to wait for tomorrow to see what was that stranger doing on my front deck. The next morning was a surprise when I heard the peace that I long thought whould never come, out of suspition, I looked outside and saw that stranger eating something. He staring at me with an unusual smerk on his face with sharper keen vision as if he was look directly at me. I went upstares to tell my mother about that stranger on my front deck. I teared when I saw that my mother wasn't there and maybe my dream was real. I took a knife out of a counter in the kitchen and treatened the stranger to leave but when i looked in his eyes, I saw the devil in preasents. I had nothing to lose in my short 12 years of life anymore, with a might that none of which ever seen, I cut his head into two. I had an emense pain in my torso and with the pain gushing out my strange wound, I saw myself to the ground. He walked away with that smerk on his face,his head infront of mine that made me spend my final minutes looking at that smerk that honestly drived me insane. I heard one noise before it was over."dont worry,it will be over soon"...silence...
- by suicidalXkiller |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: The Stranger
- Artist: suicidalXkiller
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...Are you brave enough to read...............
( i put it as non-fiction becuase im have life like dreams about this) - Date: 04/25/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- nuni kitari - 07/01/2009
- omg is there more if there is can you like send me a pm of it please i like this one you are really good
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- thrivingtoexist - 05/01/2009
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that is so creepy its awsome
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