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one day Angelica Monica went to his grandfather and grandmother house , but when Angelica Monica went to her grandparents house , then someone left i letter telling her to come in the dark cave then PS if u don't come here i will let your grandparents die. but Angelica Monica don't know how to fight .But after a hero , who became Angelica Monica friend help her to fight the bad people, Who are You said Monica , I m Daniel the hero of people here in town of Madelin.Wow! Sir Daniel can u help to save my grandparents , Sir Daniel of curse Angelica Monica , but first i teach you how to fight , get I sword in the castle , Yes Sir Daniel , Sir Daniel hold the sword properly but your right had on handle and left in other handle of the sword. Then how to attack your enemy : hold the sword then try to slash the dummy , like this Sir Daniel, very good , now use your double slash on the dummy said Sir Daniel , like this Sir .
said Sir Daniel Wow good for an girl , are you ready to fight now said Sir Daniel, Said Angelica Monica Yes Sir , Then lets go fight them , Then they went to the dark caves , Then Sir Daniel said :Who are you and why are killing Angelica Monica 's grandparents. then the bad people said we are the Evil cave man who is killing people.said Angelica Monica Grandmother and Grandfather be care full they will kill you . Then they attack the evil cave man : slash slash said Angelica Monica then Sir Daniel said your messing up with the wrong guy evil cave men . Prepare for Electronic Slasher . Said Sir Daniel Electronic slasher Mode. said Sir Daniel Die DIE DIE all of Evil cave men . then Angelica and Sir Daniel killed all the Evil Cave Men, then save Angelica Monica's grandparents. Then Angelica Monica said to Sir Daniel thank you very much for saving my grandparents. Said Sir Daniel No problem Angelica Monica any time , Good Bye Angelica Monica and your grandparents. Said Angelica Monica wait sir , where are you going , said Sir Daniel to house. Said Angelica Monica oh o.k. bye Sir Daniel.Said Sir Daniel goodbye
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- by II_kikyo_sama_II |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: This Looks likes the end .
- Artist: II_kikyo_sama_II
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Description:
This a story
but its a little bit long
but please comment me not bad things
- Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: looks likes
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Comments (4 Comments)
- II_kikyo_sama_II - 10/29/2009
- Thx for the tips
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- Jess369 - 07/22/2009
- Um..well..you should probably use quotes at the beginning and end of each statement a character says..
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- TBSC - 04/16/2009
- nice!
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- II_kikyo_sama_II - 04/12/2009
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