The last King

• Artist: mioang
• Description: This is my first stuff so im really glad if anybody would comment this story ^^
  if you want another story just request it hope you like it bye
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: only king

One day in nowhere people live realy tired because the king is really bad and a knight its sick of the king and he wants to make the kings feel the suffering of his people then the knight made a plan he made a deal with the devil in the underworld he make the deals that anyone who make the people suffer will die but with one condition after the people who makes suffer die he must bring the devil 100 people to die too so the knight make the deal
one day the king send a people to make the people pay the tax the plan really worked after the tax man come back to the king suddenly kings die with unknown virus after the kings die the people live happily but after that the knight didn't make his promise to the devil so one night the devil really mad twisted then he come to the village and kill all the people then he makes the evil king as the last king forever till now no one know the name of the village its deleted from the map


The end..........................................................................

Comments

[mioang]

yeah i wrong to put it in here but hx for the comments

[SevesDariku]

Its a good concept for a story, but its a bit lacking in depth (the grammar could also benefit from a once over)
Also, I think this was put in Non-Fiction