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Alice was 18 when she found her true love. He was just a year older but he loved Alice so much. They both wanted to be in each other’s lives forever. There was just one problem, Alice wasn’t like her true love, she was a werefox. A creature that looks like a human with ears and a tail like a fox. A creature that thirsts of blood. But Alice loved this man so much she didn’t care and he didn’t either. A year later, they got married. One night Alice's husband mysteries left and Alice got all freaked out. For days she looked for him, leaving him messages on his phone and talking to his friends. But one night she stayed home, crying. Thinking he left her cuz she was a monster, thinking why he married her. After she fell asleep, a noise woke her up. She quickly went down stairs to find her husband. She ran to him going 2 give him a kiss but when she was close he pushed her away. She laid on the floor, her eyes thirsty, mad. “Why did you leave?” she asked. “cuz I don’t want to be with you anymore, your dangerous .” He said angrily “you don’t belong in this world” Alice quickly was about to pounce on him but she noticed he was holding a knife.” no” she whispered. “Sorry, as much as I love you, I have to.” He said coming close to her. Before she could do anything else, he rapped his arms tightly around her. “I love you.” he whispered then kissed her.” we’ll meet up some time again.” He added and then stabbed her.
Her body laid there in his arms. She was still there but she couldn’t move. Then she soon realized she was died. She was a ghost now. As angrily she was, she wanted revenge. So now she wondered around revenging husbands who ever hurt there wives. She never saw her husband again. She was now Alice the Ghost of Revange.
- by IRIDESCENT PIGLET |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Ghost of Revange
- Artist: IRIDESCENT PIGLET
- Description: umm i wrote this for my ava contest thingie but i decicde to add it to writting lol.i just made it up with no thought so dont be all like ewww it suckies cuz it was like a 10 min writing
- Date: 01/20/2009
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- XxShot_DownxXBy_Hippies - 12/11/2010
- WoW! thats a nice story for a 10 min writing xD abit sad though :'(...
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- XxCare Free KiddxX - 07/28/2010
- nice nice nice : }
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- Brinioo - 03/07/2010
- Sad...
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- Tenten1415 - 01/09/2010
- awsome....very cool
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- emmaispretty123 - 07/27/2009
- very interesting.....Not quite how I expected it to end... nice though! biggrin
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- GlossieChic - 07/10/2009
- NiCE StoRy..kInd Of WeiRd Bt Cool ANd CRUel.<<PEaCE
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