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I pressed my first finger to his skin...
it traveled up...
sliding across his bare chest...
coming to it's destination...
directly above his lambaste heart.
"Pound," it said.
a second finger came to the point...
"Pound," it said.
a third...
"Pound," it said.
a fourth finger...
"Hush," it said.
no more fingers...
"How does it feel?" i persisted.
"I don't understand," he returned.
"Doesn't it bother you? That noise"
He half heartedly glared at my optimistic stare.
"You should know," he murmured.
"But I don't so tell me. How does it feel?"
I was eager now. Excited to know.
His chested rose and fell abruptly.
My insides tousled at the sudden motion,
but ignored his agitation and continued my childish stare.
"How come you don't know yourself?" he budged. Irate obviously.
"You don't remember? I gave you mine."
My fingers pressed done on the gently pulsing spot, trying to stop its continuous rising.
"I've forgotten. Will you remind me?" I pleaded.
After a moment his glare softened.
"Yes," still annoyed.
He pried my fingers away from the pulse, but placed my palm back to the skin.
"Listen."
He whispered the command.
"Don't speak. Don't think."
- by UnConCeivAble |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Exasperation
- Artist: UnConCeivAble
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Description:
About A Girl Who Wants To Know What It Feels Like To Have A Heart--Now That She's Given Hers Away To Him--Simply Because She Cannot Remember.
I Felt That I Needed To Write Something.
This Bit Doesn't Seem As Confusing As Some Of The Others.
That's Quite An Accomplishment If You Ask Me.
I Think I'm Getting Better With Each Try.
I Hope My Instincts Are Write.
Enjoy!
~Kris - Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: exasperation heart fingers girl
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Rhemira - 05/14/2009
- This is incredibly good! I may not understand all of it, but it definitely inspires me! You HAVE to write more! 5/5!
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- Skittles Queen Rules01 - 04/03/2009
- um.... okay...
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- ii_phatboy - 03/01/2009
- I thought that was a story. pls write more of it it's good
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- Megeegan - 12/29/2008
- I really like it. It confused me at first, but I really do love it!
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- blah65DKCD - 12/24/2008
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wow.
thats really good.imean really really good.
man u could make a storie out of this. - Report As Spam